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Happy Nielsen's avatar

This was beautiful and heartbreaking. Why am I about to cry over a lemon tree 😩

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

I think we all have our own lemon tree somewhere, holding memories we didn’t realize still mattered.

B Philippe's avatar

Beautiful sensory imagery, I really enjoyed reading this.

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

Thank you. Imagery does the remembering for us sometimes.

Alex Cosgrove's avatar

Moving. You put the reader there with your outstanding story telling skills!

Aster solenne's avatar

Love it! Amazing piece! It's been a while since I read a post like this, absolutely LOVE it!❤️‍🩹💖

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

I’m so glad it resonated with you. Some stories sleep for a while before they decide to return.

Aster solenne's avatar

Fr! It's beautifully written 💖

Rebecca Watson (ReBe)'s avatar

Oh how beautifully heartbreaking!!

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

Heartbreak has its own kind of beauty 💔 ❤️‍🔥

Ariadne Pautina's avatar

This is gorgeously heartbreaking… it resonated deeply. 🖤

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

Grateful it found you. Some stories break just right.

Huihui's avatar

This is beautiful 🩷

j̵o̷h̴a̶n̸n̸a̵'s avatar

What a beautiful, heartbreaking story. I enjoyed the sensory detail, the scent of lemons is going to linger with me for a while. Glad to see your writing again!

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

Thank you. The scent seems to follow me too, like memory refusing to fade. It’s good to be back in the static, sending signals again

KJ Harlow's avatar

Good to see you again GMA! I was there with the MC as you wrote. It was all so sensory. Thanks for sharing this.

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

The Archive wakes when someone remembers. Grateful you were there in the static with them - that’s exactly where the story lives.

Birdie Falling's avatar

Applause. This one flowed incredibly smoothly. Glad to see you in my inbox. 👏🏽

Ghost Machine Archive's avatar

This ghost felt good to be in the proverbial writers chair, and felt even better to land in a familiar inbox.

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